Can You Guys Watch This and Give Criticism?

I just finished a movie I was working on for Simstopia TV
What do you guys think about it?

First off, I would use this cheat when making a machinima *especially when you're using subtitles*

hideheadlineeffects on

This will turn off their thought bubbles and the plumbob won't show.

My other suggestion would be this:

When doing conversations--do you know about the preset channels you can use to focus on one sim at a time or make smooth movement from one part to another? Use the cameraman mode (tab) to focus on each sims face when they are talking and cut back and forth when each is talking. You can pre-set the camera (in cameraman mode) by setting up your camera where you like, then hit CTRL + 5-9 (choose a number, any number), then do the same for the other sim.

If not, or if that didn't make sense, check this out (jump to 3:00 mark to see the tutorial on the preset channels):

Thanks for the tips Brunnette
And I just noticed my credits messed up >.>

I'm gonna redo it with those cheats and camera movements!